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Dead as Night

Tonight
The wind blows differently
Swirling dead leaves into a rapid frenzy
Tonight
I leave my window open....just in case
Feeling u  close, watching me
Tonight
Something about the moon is brighter
Illuminating ominous shadows in the dark
Tonight
I wouldn't mind, no not at all
If into my window u crawled
Tonight
Amid the creepy darkness
I beg to be yours
Tonight
If only for
Tonight
Could I feel ur wind-whipped fingertips
Upon the lace of my panties
searching, frantic for the heat that lay between
I lay frozen,  afraid...but not really
Opening slightly for ur icy appendages
Leaking slowly upon them involuntarily
I  search the shadows for  ur face, but fail to find it
Though my heated passion has ur fingertips made their home
Gentle,  yet feverish....u  await my impending arousal
Deeper,  u search,  awakening the animalistic fury  within me
I  release...shuddering into  the  palm of ur near-frozen hand.......
I open my eyes to an empty room, soaked sheets and a closed window....
Thank you for....
Tonight.....

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  • darell
    October 20

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    BreathTaking..

    this incredible write touch me deeply.
    Although sensual, it has a very intimate
    feeling of sincerity. One to be swept off
    and away by the object of your affection.
    I also loved the clandestined mood of this piece.
    You write extremely well. Its easy to follow your
    creative mind. to see what you see.
    Thank you for the sensually mystical and
    provocative journey into your world of dreams


  • lyricist
    October 10
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    interesting...

    this poem is hot and very deep. seductively amazing. you know how to paint a picture. thats the truth. love the poem


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 2
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    wowwweee..

    hott damn.. excellent my friend..


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 26
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    wow sis!!! I loved it!!! So hot!!! All I can say is wow!!!! Great job


  • Galaxy2
    September 26

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    Gentle, yet feverish....u await my impending arousal
    Deeper, u search, awakening the animalistic fury within me
    I release..shuddering into the palm of near-frozen hand......

    Wow!
    that's great!
    So impressive!
    So erotic!
    So pleasure-giving!

    Thank you for....
    Tonight....

    Kisses all over!

  • mcfreeman
    September 25
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    a cool drink of water....

    and a warm wet memory

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