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luna

dance beneath the moon,
sing her a ballad of love,
feel her silver touch. 

what emotions does this inspire within you?

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  • Dariha
    September 26

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    brilliant haiku; I loved the actions - dancing, singing and feeling. They go so well with each other and with the theme. The poem as a whole is incredibly imperative - and forces us to appreciate 'Luna' for her source of insipiration. Great write!