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damnation of blood

beating hearts bled dry,
rose with blackest thorns have peirced,
let rose red lips drink.

what emotions does this inspire within you?

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  • xxuglyducklingxx
    September 25

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    O.O;;

    This is rather intruiging. I liked the different sensations this brought up. I'm not one to respect short writing styles of any sort, but I like this. It's inspiring and elegantly, sexily, and divinely composed. I can't exactly explain why, but I love this. O.O Brava on a great write m'dear.