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kittens

lepaing, flying, jumping fur balls,
little kittens are at play.
pouncing, scratching, in the halls,
kittens are at play today.
beady eyes and fluffy tail,
soft brown bellies and tiny paws,
listen to that young mouth wail,
they have no care for any laws.
they love to play all day and night,
climb under the bushes and up the trees,
they love to scratch and bite and fight,
they play where no one else will see.

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eww...fluffy...but i wrote it soo...

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  • Shulamite
    September 26
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    I felt happy while I was reading this poem. Then I felt a little bit of piety for the smallness/fragilty of kittens and then I felt jealous. You are right when you said, "they have no care for any laws", and I wish I had the ability to not care for some things. Also, I'm jealous that they play all day and find contentment with almost anything. I appreciate the poem and the question you asked with it. (I hope I answered it correctly) Cute short poem, I liked it.


    • Dark-Ecanus27
      September 26
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      it would be nice not to care about some things, but i think we would lose ourselves to the point where we cared about nothing. thank you for finding questions in my poetry, and answering them.