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the first kiss

a sudden warmth,
her arms are around me.
i look down,
soft, pink as rose pettles,
her lips meet mine.
and then is over.
perhaps next time,
ill get to taste those
sweet rose pettles,
just a little bit longer.

Author notes

this was created during the befudlement after my first "real" kiss

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