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I know
that I can't
promise you anything
of great value
because I've done
some fucked up
things in my past.
and I don't know
when and if
karma will come
into play with you.
because its usually
once your handed
something ' good',
its taken away.
but you see,
its plain to say
your the best thing
thats ever happened
to me.
and even though
it wont have
much purpose,
I promise you
from this day on,
I give you my all.
I can only hope
that this little thread
that holds us together,
has enough force
to make it through
difficult times.
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Author notes
title means- the past is the past.
In a list
A contest entry
- People who have touched me in the past were only slaves tending to me until you arrived by afroqban.
4100 points, ended September 29, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honest thoughts. thank you
Comments
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once your handed
something ' good',
its taken away.
and
can only hope
that this little thread
that holds us together,
has enough force
to make it through
difficult times.
are both very moving sections, this poem is honest and moving. I really like it.
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joy !
thank you for the comment, i wrote this in like 10 minutes.
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With simplicity yet beauty - I feel this opens very powerful doors. The message is strong, gifts the reader some light not only into the writer but the life between, beautifully done.
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because its usually once your handed something ' good', its taken away.
This is real talk. Real raw emotions handed to the person you want to love. Awesome job! Thanks for telling me what the Title meant, Though I didn’t know, I was still intrigued lol.
Your opening is hot!
“I know
that I can't
promise you anything
of great value
because I've done
some fucked up
things in my past.”
OOOH YES! I know what you mean, Funny I have thought the same thing before. Though never told anyone.
“and I don't know
when and if
karma will come
into play with you.”
Yes, damn karma. It scares me. But it cant be avoided, like death. Everything comes back around to us. It has for me anyway.
You opened up my eyes on this one. Even gave me a few ideas to tell someone lol. Thank you so much for this awesome entry. I truly appreciate you joining my contest and showing off your talent for us to enjoy. I wish you the best in the contest. Much love and respect.
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