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psalm.


this day is drifting needless
heads are talking, dripping
the blood and stomach thrown maggots of
chaos, blessed be my father.

fire, red storms swell
in mountains of a circling mass
winds punish the veins, ashes
to ashes, dust to dust.

fatal, I am loose over script
drawing lines, a living circumference in
this fetal approach to create, blindly.

imprints, voices of the sand
necks turn in righteous ways
voices snap, here is the cross I believe in, here
the bones speak hard of night.

a glass is joined, only by the death throes of
my patience for non-poetry, sub-life or
a dark red mistress whore, who wears
the magnificent chains of a violence, ordained.



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Author notes

Prompt: i want to drink that last shot of whiskey and smoke that last cigarette

sobriety sucks.

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 10

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    Rob this is a stunning piece
    powerful! and most certainly a
    masterpiece!! no wonder people are
    drawn to it! just simply beautiful!!

    with love and blessings

    Rend


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 28

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    THIS IS A VERY STRONG PICTURE PACKED WRITE CRAFTED WITH OBVIOUS PASSION FOR THE ART
    TAKE A BOW
    T


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 27

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    whoa. wow. impressive;
    there is alot for me to
    absorb when reading this
    and I find myself not wanting
    to leave the page; I just
    want to read it again &
    again

    excellent.
    best of luck!

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Edie gold member
    September 25

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    What's so cool is that I was actually thinking of psalm 10:4 today...

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