Some peoples see us on our bike
And ask us where we're going
We say we just are going out
But where we are not knowing.
We ride along the highway
And we wave to all that pass
We hope we do not overturn
And end up on our ass!
Me little sister sitting there
Says watch the road you git
Cause if you don't we might just crash
And end up in the shit!
We pass a lot of travellers
Who just stare as we go by
Me little sister hates their stares
And spits right in their eye!
We are just funny Hamsters
Who are out to have some fun
And if you do not like our style
you can shove it up your Bum!
Author notes
Seems these little guys controlled my keyboard!
In a list
A contest entry
- The Get Away by Ann45.
800 points, ended September 26, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOL....
This is really cute. Congrats on the Silver 
With the exception of one vulgar word 
this was a fast & funny read. I enjoyed this. 
for the smile! 
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Thanks, mate. Appreciate your read very much. Take care.
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LMAO
so funny! you have given fun to a set of hamsters...riding their bike and cruising the streets..spit in the eyes of those who stare...congrats on the silver and niaish for the laugh
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Thank oyu. I don't normally write in this style but it seemed to come out with this one.
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Very cute! I have been into humour lately. Enjoyed this very much. Still smiling...
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Thank you so much, my friend. The contest i entered it in was great.
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Another fun read
Love the animated picture goes well with the poem .
I've only just got the hang of the bunny inserts couldn't understand at first Doh!!
but now I can fit the appropriate words in ok -
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Hey, do you know Doh is the name of one of the characters in my book? Doh?
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Thank you. Glad you liked this one.
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Effin wonderful! I happened to have the poem and the picture fit perfectly on my screen, so I had that image through the whole read. We are just funny little hamsters, aren't we?
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Thanks, mate. Yep. These little guys are so cute.
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Love it! I even had to read it out loud and it was well received by the family who also thought it was great. A super bit of harmless fun. Well done, I hope you had as much fun thinking and writing it as I am sure everyone does while reading it.
Sheila
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Thanks, Shelia. Crazy Hamsters. These are not your average cute little guys, are they?
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haha my first smile of the day....a great poem by a great poet skilled in many forms..but underlying all your work is honesty, integrity and devotion to your art..well done...eric
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Thanks. Catch you on the weekend.
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Ha Ha
Oh Hey. ha ha ha love it. thanks for entering mate
Good Luck
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I loved the picture and couldn't resist. Normally, I am not very good at contest and don't enter many but the mood was right here.
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A wonderful Little bit of humour, so fitting to the image.Had me with a large grin by the end of the read
Great read Good luck in the contest
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Thanks, Legend. A little different from normal style.
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Hysterical laughter!!!!!!! Oh flippin brillint "C" I would have liked to have said one part hit me harder than the rest ,but it's all fantastic. How did you know I needed this today.Definately one to bookmark for cloudy days...Bless you...mal
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Thanks, mal. I've been umming and urring whether i would enter this contest or not but that little picture really got me going. thanks for dropping by.
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So glad you did my dear friend, so glad you did...
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LMAO What an ending This is brilliant! And they both look like such innocents lol. Butter wouoldn't melt in their mouths Best wishes in the contest
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Thanks, mate. Who ever said that Hamsters were all innocents? lol!!!!!!!!!!! These guys have attitude!
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Love it Lee. I can see these little guys telling you what to write. A happy bouncy poem. Good luck.
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Thanks, Bob. Like I said to arafura, it's not normally the type of poem I write but it seemed fitting for this one somehow. Thanks for stopping by.
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You're a card! You've got a great sense of fun poet. Thanks for the smile.
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Thank you so much. I just wrote this for that contest. Not normally my way of writing but it fit.
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