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A rose for love

She sets her heart out for love.
She wants to feel it.
She tries to love. 

Her hands search the dark.
Her arms outstretched in the night.
Her  lips quiver.
Her body shakes.
She wants to feel loved.
She gave her heart once.

It was the nicest person she met.
She loved this person with every fiber of her being.
Her body resonated with love for this person.
For a wile everything was good.
Then the day came.

Her heart,
It was destroyed. 
She was left broken and alone.
"I did not want to hurt you."

'Tis the reason for the pain.
However much they tried to hide.
The one to cause the most pain
Is the one who she loved the most.
For all the love she gave
There was no love that was returned.

As the world keeps twirling.
Her life keeps going.

Everyone telling her,
She is not good enough.
Your a terrible person.
How could anyone ever love someone like you.

That struck a nerve.
It made her cry,
She would scream out at night.
She felt alone.
She felt like no one loved her.

As no one truly and actually loved her.

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  • MJ Forgives
    September 26

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    Ahhh how sad but such a lovely poem. It really is. I especially like this part: "She sets her heart out for love.
    She wants to feel it.
    She tries to love.

    Her hands search the dark.
    Her arms outstretched in the night." I especially can relate to this part though: "Everyone telling her,
    She is not good enough.
    Your a terrible person.
    How could anyone ever love someone like you.

    That struck a nerve.
    It made her cry,
    She would scream out at night.
    She felt alone.
    She felt like no one loved her.

    As no one truly and actually loved her.". Keep on writing! Love this poem!
    -Jess


    • Binary Fairy
      September 27
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      Thank you im so glad you like it i really put a lot of thought into this one


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    September 25
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    "For a wile everything was good." while*

    i like this a lot