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Best Friend

I said I had a problem,
You said you understood,
You are always there for me,
Like a best friend should.

When I need to talk,
You're the one I call,
The one who is by my side,
To catch me when I fall.

If I shed a single tear,
You ask me what is wrong?
You have always made me feel
Like I truly belong.

Author notes

This poem was written about my best friend Jesse.

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 12
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    great and good rhyme.


  • deep blue sea
    September 25
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    shooooooooo shweeeeeeet.i want a best friend like in ur poem


  • StarOfDreams23
    September 25

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    wow this is a great poem! Something my bff promised me but I don't feel it anymore. We are drifting and your friend Jesse is lucky to have someone like you and your lucky to have them because you'll never break that promise. Your true friends and that well never end. Great poem, was really expressed well! BRAVO!!!


    • codsta
      September 26
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      Wow! Thanks for your comment. I really appreciate it.

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