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How Could You

Why would you try to cheat on me
locked in a bathroom stall
How could you fucking cheat on me
at work all places of all
How could it accomplish anything
besides satisfy your dick
I thought I meant more to you
you stupid fucking prick
What did I do to earn this
What the hell did I do wrong
to give your self to someone else
like I don't even belong
How dare you fucking cheat on me
after all you've put me through
And yet time and time again
I've put up with you
And even though I love you so
my heart can't take no more
I need to know your heart's true call
least I walk out the door...

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  • nous. gold member
    September 25

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    excellent! the emotion is quite strong.. and the flow of this is great. lovely piece. mine cheated on me to -.- not the same way though hah. sometimes... i swear. -.- but great pen.