She's wanted for her crimes across the state
But Passions won't give up without a fight
She's not the kind to sit and wait for fate
Who cares if running naked ain't polite!
The guards are busy watching her perform
Instead of keeping watch outside the walls
The noises that they hear must be a storm
Each one of them is thinking with his balls!
Now Johnny's gang are ready in the street
With dynamite to blow the jail apart
While Passions sweeps her warders off their feet
He gives his men the signal they should start!
The Chief cannot believe his lucky day
His dream has come alive and blows a kiss
Too bad the time has come to run away
She's always been a quite explosive Miss
Machine guns play a stiff staccato song
And dynamite supplies the undertones
A day that started right has turned out wrong
They leave a smoking mess and dying moans
She's in the car and sat at Johnny's side
To shows him just how grateful she can be
He's gonna have his greatest, wildest ride
As Passions makes the most of being free!
A contest entry
- PASSIONS HAS BEEN CAUGHT!!! Help Free this Fugitive (big Points) by PassionsPromise.
4000 points, ended October 1, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Nice little story in a poem and a nice little poem in the story. You write so well, with perfect comidic timing. I really enjoyed your little bit of fun. The final verse, at least for me, was the most humourous - although I enjoyed the intrigue and derring-do of the entire write. Rose.
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You're a delightful gentleman, Mr. elegant weskit! With a marvelous sense of humor! I loved it all the way from the first line through the last!
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LMAO
well indeed, I AM FREE I AM FREE
Thank you Jeff for this lovely adventure. And am glad for them dying moans for they had treated me terribly.
Good luck
Passions
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LOL! Jeff, this was simply great, as we are all used to seeing from you of course, but the metaphors and visuals were just titillating to say the least. You know I am well acquainted with explosive devices from the service and some activity with California DOT back in the 70s? That all came to an end when we got a job blowing up an eight foot boulder out of a guys back yard to install a hot tub back in 91, we drilled the holes, placed the charges and let her rip. unfortunately, what we did not know is that there was a pool of water under the boulder, and since one cannot compress water, the explosion redirected its force up and the boulder shatter and hurled several large pieces skyward. one went through the hood of an old non-running Cadillac down the street, another went through the shed in the back yard, demolishing it with a horrendous noise and the third large piece flew over the house, landing in the street about 15 feet in front a of a Sheriffs department patrol car. LOL!
( fortunately my friend was a retired LA sheriffs deputy- so no problem.)
we broke even on the job after paying for the damage, the guy was well pleased the boulder was gone however.
But hell, we had fun for several years
great write Jeff, truly-thks
Len
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The Chief cannot believe his lucky day
His dream has come alive and blows a kiss
Too bad the time has come to run away
She's always been a quite explosive Miss
oh, I so loved this part.
perfection.
Very English, I think-if that makes sense.
best wishes, love.
jin
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Wonderful tale you have penned
I was captivated throughout
I'm sooooo glad Passions is finally getting her freedom
Passions is so lovable but can get quite feisty...
especially being naked with kinky guards around
kinda giving JohnnyD and I hell to get her out
sheesh, we are doing our best
Glad the Chief and his gang got what was coming to them
As always you rhyme and flow is brilliant
Wish you the very best in the contest
Take care
David
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