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Trick or Treat

Witches around the corner
Goblins at each house
Monsters creeping up behind you
Quiet as a mouse

Jack-o-Lanterns laughing
Sending chills down your spine
Skeletons with candy bags
Sitting down to dine

So many creatures at each house
And lining street after street
You blend in with them, race to a house
Shout, "Trick or Treat!"

A contest entry

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  • Little Lesley
    October 25
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    This is a great poem. I like the backgroud!
    Good Luck!
    ♥~Little Lesley~&hearts


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    October 1

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    Sending chills down your spine ... perhaps send
    Shout, "Trick or Treat!" ... perhaps shouting


    fun light-hearted read showing notably the poet blending in yet retaining her own personality :ç


  • shelldefined
    September 26

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    Hi Claire Bear!!!

    Haven't commented in a long time! I loved it just like I envy all your other poems. I'll say...you've used the word "house" alot. First stanza made sense, but then you used it again in the third stanza, twice. You should work on that. A very good choice of backround too! Overall, great poem. You deserved to win an honorable mention.

    luvs ya,
    panini


  • SamanthaSam gold member
    September 25

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    You did an awesome job with this on imagery, rhyme and rhythm. Perfect poem. I love it. Keep on penning. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck in it. Have a nice evening.
    Sam I Am


  • X...
    September 25

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    *gives you 10 kajillion applause* ^_^ your poems are always so awesome hehe *huggle*

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