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untittled heart

jealous
insecure
malice
unsure
self loath
in love
crushing breaths
broken hearts
horrible fights
leaving us tears at night
fears of break up
the very next day we kiss and make up
broke down
anxiety filled
save me again from myself
and name this
untittles heart                                        Love= Eternity



Rose= Beauty                                                                    Beauty= love



SASTIL
(save a soul thats in love)

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  • newnoakua
    October 26
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    Oh this is cool. Way different from what you're used to seeing. And I'd have to agre, the last line is great. Save a soul


  • Borntowriteforever
    September 28
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    wow, this is really neat. i really like the last line; save a soul thats in love. really well written


  • BadazzGangsta
    September 25
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    this is a cool poem....or wutever u wna call it lol...reminds me of us....i love u baby