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Still Turn Me On

It’s there everyday, whatever I do,
The way that I feel, when I wake next to you.
It’s the sound of your voice, the swell of your hips,
The way that you hold me, the taste of your lips.
The warmth of your body, pressed next to mine,
The smell of your hair, your ice cold behind.
The way that you lead, when you say  that you can’t,
The way that you smile whenever we dance.
The way that you are when things work out right,
Just being with you when we turn out the light.
The way that you say, this is where you belong,
You are the one, that still turns me on.

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 6
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    this is so gorgeous!! i feel the love in this
    write, its so moving! ss
    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Archangel Knight gold member
    September 25

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    Wonderful rhyme perfect capture of love and intimacy after a relationship has gone through the tracks of time. Fantastic write, thank you for entering