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© Symphony of Our Soul ~h~

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Stepping stones of a symphony orchestra
May my fingers glide upon your angelic aura
Tingling sensations of moonlit presence
My soul lives by thy heartbeat, yearning to dance to thy existence
Frolicking about to your brazen smile
A lyrical gaze only explained through tender fusion
As my inner being is concealed by your purity…
I am protected from the world's wandering temptation
I awaken each day, by the theme song of my heart's love for you
A song I simply cannot get out of my head
A song that shapes the very fabric of my temperament
Skin as smooth as polished ivory
Like strings pulled tight as gravity, I am enticed to thy sanctum
A sanctum filled with stars of hope and reliance
I am taken, as if by sounds of harps, as you speak the fidelity of our harmony
For as long as I shall live to our prosperity…
I will know and remember the symphony of our heart as one

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For Contest Purposes: Phrase prompt is..." You are the words to my hearts music "...me in thought of my sweetheart

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  • Vhoori
    October 28

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    Awww! How sweet! The music and the love are one in this poem, and it is completely beautiful. Congratulations on the honorable mention, and especially on having a love like this.
    Keep up the good writing!


    Vhoori


  • SteveS gold member
    October 22

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    Really well done with that prompt quote. I like how you maintain the music metaphor throughout.

  • Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • SteveS gold member
    September 25
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    This is a very rich poem. The texture of yearning is palpable and I think the ending is powerful in the apparent resignation.


  • AngelicDreams
    September 25

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    WOW

    This is so amazingly sweet. I simply loved it. I love how you use your words and express yourself. I loved it all.

    Best of luck in the contest

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