Im so sick,
I get heartaches.
Everywhere I go,
Reminds me of you.
I dont want it to,
I want to let it go,
but i cant.
I wont.
Everytime I see you,
the pain kills me.
But i cant stay away,
And i cant be near you.
Can i admit it?
no.
I deserved it,
I knew it.
And now its over.
Hes lost,
I'm alone and broken.
I want him back,
but i dont.
Just leave me...
Get out of my head,
Clear of my heart.
Author notes
i was crying writing this so dont make a joke. i f you cant handle i dont read it.
What do you think?
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Heartache visits us all..I too have felt this recently. But just know in time the pain goes away. The memory will always linger, but it will get easier.
This was a wonderful expression of raw emotion.
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Thanks. I hope it all works out foa you tooo.
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This is a good write! The emotion really comes out. Very nice.
I have been through this situation before, i know its hard to let someone you love go. You just gotta believe that everything is gonna get better. -
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thanks, yeah- i have abandonment paranoia issues, its hard for me to believe somethings okay. im working on it though...
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I can tell you actually experienced this by all the times you write one thing and then write "but"...everything is this poem is so honest. i can feel your pain just by reading it.
my favorite lines are:
Get out of my head,
Clear of my heart.
and im sorry.
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its okay. thanks for reading it.
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You don't know me but I wanted to tell you something anyway. "Life sucks. But you've gotta keep fighting or the pain will never go away." Good poem, by the way.
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haha, good phrase. (:
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ahhh the teenage years can be such a drag, we've all been there - i know i have - it sucks but there'll be other guys along the way and this one will just be a distant memory so let time be your healer, and let your AP family be your crutches in this difficult time in your life. Much love...
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hmm, thank you. i know that my ap family will definately give me all the support i need. <33
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This is really powerful. And although it probably doesn't mean much, I'm very sorry.
If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm a really good listener =]
Great job.
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ilove hearing that, it always means alot. thank you, i will
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i totally understand. great poem
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im sorrry
i kno how that feels
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Aww hey I'm sorry you feel like this...I can understand what you feel
very powerful! stay strong things will get better for you x x x
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thanks
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Hey, that was very heartfelt, hope you feel better soon hunny xxx
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im sorry baby. so sorry. i feel kinda bad now. push through.
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whatever, like i said- it was my fault sammy.
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Oh sweetie its ok. I understand exactly how you feel. Its horrible but it will get better you just have to stay strong, and try to be happy sweetie it will all fade I promise
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aww, thank you. i love being called sweetie and honey makes me feel nice. xD thank youu....
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Im sorry baby.
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thanks allie, kinda embarrasing O.o
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very beatifully written.
i know exactly how you feel.
but you will get it with time, trust me
If you need to talk i am always here for you.
Peace.
Hugs and Luv.
Hope and Healing.
xxXxx
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really has it ever happened to you?
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Yeah it still hurts too see him and not be beside but its getting better day by day.
but i know one day soon i will move on and i will strong again and so will you
Peace.
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awww. i am sorry. i know how it feels. i hope u feel better
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thanks
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