~*~
ice storms
wrap crystal sheathes
around sleeping woodlands
bringing life and light to those who
would image the splendor of God’s artwork
and see beyond the destruction
of such cold and brutal
falls of last night’s
ice storms
~*~
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Comments
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Definately something im looking for
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Good Image
Ice and snow do make the world look like a wonder land. Every ay things take on a new image when covered with the icy matter of snow and ice. Ice hanging from trees and fenses shine like prisms with little sunlight.
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a neighborhood of words
the subject matter is vast, and you simplified it not just by rictameter's rigidness but your deftness tied as a ribbon. as you don't nestle us into shorterm need to get a camera at that distance, but "beyond the destruction
of such cold and brutal
falls of last night’s
ice storms" cycling us from a melt to many times, while the year could be different as under calendar's system fresher than climate control
it rolled well for me
pre... -
excellent
form, and subject..perfect!
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Grea job with the form. A great rictameter that is perfect form and still reads with sense.
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Visually appealing,
starkly revealing
beauty from destruction
revealed in this strong piece!
Kudos!
M-C
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Good job, Sis.
I can see the vivid images (and been through a few ice storms, too).
I like that part;
wrap crystal sheathes
around sleeping woodlands
I never thought of it like that. I like it.
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