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Trying to Breathe

&& no matter what you do or say
its never the right thing and
your left in a pile on the floor
trying to breathe




[ i give up]

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&& We just let it die

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  • WonderingForever
    November 5
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    this is a sad, but a good poem.

    love the ending.


  • Iofiel
    October 12

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    =O

    love. love. love. Gorgeous.

    I just love the line at the end, the [i give up]. Amazing poem.

    (oh, by the way, I think the "your" in the third line should be "you're". Still amazing, though.)