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Momentum

momentum.
an emotional step forward
my heart is here. I love to
be loved at  this moment in
time. Moving on, forward
progress. time doesn't stop
for your heart to beat, it just
beats and time brings new things.
new love, a new kiss from a new
one. moving on forward progress,
forward motion this is love and
progression. open my heart to
feel something new. i love to be
loved when i am loved by you.
momentum.

I tend to make horrible grammatical erros and can't ever find tem on my own. Maybe becasue I dont try hard enough but whatev. if you see em please say so. THNX -sub

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  • kacooper
    September 26
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    "open my heart to
    feel something new. i love to be
    loved when i am loved by you"
    You did a really great job on this one. Congrats ^_^