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True Friend

If my life flashed before my eyes
If i thought that i was about to die
Would i be happy? would i be sad?
Would i just sit and cry

If i had to think about
All the sins in my life
The way i treated my only
The way i abused that knife

Am i really happy?
No im fucking not
My life is so fucked up
More so than i thought

I have treated people in such a way
That i should be disowned, forgot
I should never be spoken to
For every fucked up thought

But my friends wont do that to me
They could never make me hurt
Alouth ive treated them like shit
After ive been such a jerk

So thank the lord for my one true friend
The only one ill ever love
The best of all ive ever met
The rest shes all above

For she loves me and she cares for me
She tell me i AM strong
We have so much togther
A verry special bond

If it wasnt for my angel
Right now i wouldnt be here
Id have no reason to belong
If she didnt love me

This poem that im writeing
Is to thank a special friend
She has done so much for me
Alicia ill love you till the end

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I love u ali

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  • JeremyWilliams
    October 1
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    yea i know it was im sorry


  • My Last Breath.x
    September 29

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    Yeah .. That was kind of unnecessary .. Don't'cha think ??

    Kandace has been there for you a lot .. probably more so than I have. She helped you through this summer, if you don't recall. You can't really expect her to take that the 'right' way .. There is no 'right' way for that.

    Don't think I'm piling up against you, but that comment was uncalled for babe.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    September 25

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    " So thank the lord for my one true friend "

    You were right. I did take it the wrong way, and still am. I just had to read it again to make sure I had read it right the first time.

    It's nice to know that you only have one true friend.
    I'm so glad I was informed of that. *note the sarcasm*


  • My Last Breath.x
    September 25
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    I love you too Jeremy <3

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