Bated breath;
waiting for permission.
Denial!
Sweet sacrifice;
her submission.
A contest entry
- Gimme 10 words (erotic PIF) by Mistress Rose.
1000 points, ended October 19, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
Comments
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very nice done
permission / denial
hmm...exciting write lil tulip
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Well done
Very well written......good job on this one
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One of the worst forms of torture in the BDSM world is denial...
well done and good luck in the contest.
**Master Ktulu** -
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worst?
you think? giggles, glad you liked the write, ty for the comment and wishes as always!
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strong feelings expressed so beautifully in so few words..
d authority n torture r well depicted..
good luck for d contest..
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thanks!
for the read, and for your comemnts, sometimes the hardest things to write are in these contests with so few words, glad my idea came through!
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wonderfully said in so few words
Good luck to you
Passions
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I think you have certainly succeeded in depicting sweet and sexy torture..
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Now that is very seductive and a pure torture. Best of luck to you with these words. One that submits is one that has found strength.
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Very strong, clear and yet seductive and senseual at the same time, the sense of fear, the quiver, the acceptance of the authority, a voice in the distance, yet her completeness in the sound. Well done.
Love,
Tom B.
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thank you
for the comment Tom, its a hard thing to write about torture in just 10 words, and i wanted it to be a sweet torture, smiles, i am glad i conveyed what i intended, and ty for appreciating this write of mine. ty for taking the time to read it!
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