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The Crow

Darker than darkness,
It darkens your eyes to see a new moon.

A contest entry

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    November 10

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    Interesting.

    Short, but powerful, and the phrase, "Darker than darkness" is definitely abstract, but beautiful.

    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.

    - Blue-rose beauty


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 10

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    thank you for entering

    for just two lines, amazing! I love it and its a fantastic write, great job. good luck and thanks for entering!
    -penguin-


  • NyteShade
    October 22
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    ooo Beautifuly written.
    Love it


  • guardianhost gold member
    October 4
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    This is a deep write...

    thought provoking as the darkest contrasts in the new moon.
    Well done thank you for writing and posting.

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