ohstariwillnottakeyoufromyourblackhole
asitisitistoolong
nostarnomoonomoonlightsong
His eyes could not hide the lies ... their lovely softness faked an open soul. The stare stayed cold. Blown kisses were bored gestures of dazed decline, thrown towards an unseen screen. Listless, he sat, replaying the old game. First music sent then listened to the endless rants of unloved hours gone in chant. Sneers pulled his lips in mocked pretense. Hatred, revenge, and sheer contempt.
Mothermothermother! Hate you so. Cold in gleam his anger's grown.
Content deleted. Screen closed. History gone ... Complete the fun.
So it is done.
And she had known all along.
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Awesome, my dear Myra. You've opened the box and let it all out. My teeth were clinched throughout the reading!
Not sure about what you had to deliver, but it reads full and complete to me!
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Very intense, with a style that cuts to the chase to deliver a lasting impact.
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Very well done, dear. I like your wording a lot. I think I understand your inspiration behind this.
Thank you so much for entering this contest. Best of luck/wishes to you!
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What happened to the contest?
Did you delete it?
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Sorry, hon. I hope that you are aren't mad now that I explained what happened.
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such expression and detailed emotions across your page Poetess
this is pure POETRY
God bless you Poetess...
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