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Hungry eyes

Hungry eyes
a morning coffee
contemplating numbers
simplistic calories
consuming the nutrients
stuck in a hunger haze
a never ending problematic faze
the battle of perseverance
struggle with sacrifice
judging glares
perfection could you bare
a moment it time
ticking by each pound
mirror image of failure
loves her soul enough
to hold her self up
fighting depressions war
with a measuring tape as a whip
to defend what she knows is real
pleading fingers
color bones of bones
pale skins a white flag
she contemplates recovery
as she wishes for something more

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just my simple life

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