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The End Of The Realms Legend

In the time of the end
Armies shall war and
Men shall flee
When the armies of three
Fall to their knees
At the kings of threes

Kings shall battle
As one will fall
The strongest of them all
And it turns to two
Who shall fight till the final time
As the world turns to dispair

The fallen will rise once more
With no weapon but a seal
To return the world to its former glory
And end the quarel of the two kings

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  • live-laugh-love
    September 28

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    interesting

    it's verry visual,
    and i can almost here the battle,
    i must say, i do like it
    the beginning doesnt really make sense to me,
    but it still flows, yes it is a good poem


  • dreams of a gypsy
    September 26

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    interesting

    your style of writing is interesting. i suggest you look for deeper meanings behind your words.what you may find might suprise you.


    clara snow


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 25

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    i lik this poem alot
    it sort of rminds me of the battles we sometimes fight
    within ourselves