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Paper dinosaurs flash blue and green

 

 

 

Was it God that said ' Let there be light ' or was it me ?

     It may have been the dead guy in that car, yes,

you see him, crushed to the shape of a letter ' S ',

or is it a snake ?

     Does it matter if I can't spell my name, yet spell yours

perfectly, or is it a folded paper plane that just landed the

right way up ?

     Is this a ramble or a vent of imagination, it doesn't matter,

you're reading it any way, so the blame lies with you.

I could tell you about paper dinosaurs, but they will be extinct

soon, so I'll light the blue flare, run my hands through green

and wish you well.

     Although the guy in the car moved, did you see him.

I think it's God.

Or was it the snake that moved ?

It doesn't really matter.

The light is still there, the guy's dead, the dinosaurs are dead

and the flash of blue and green turned into the ocean.

 

 

Take care .... We may not cross these words again.

Will you bleed or shall I ? Blue and green naturally.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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2. Paper dinosaurs flash blue and green.

I'm out of emotion so ran with weird instead.

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 25

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    Yes, this is a bit weird, but I liked it!To me it has the feel of a rambling conversation with someone one knows very well. I liked the line "...Blue and green naturally." at the end. This is actually kind of relaxing to read. Good luck in the contest (and forgive my own ramblings, here )


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 25

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    Since when is "weird" not an emotion, Scribe??? I love your twisted humour and your utter sense of the bizarre. Paper dinosaurs, indeed. Good luck in the contest, my Friend.




  • Heroesrox
    September 25

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    Hm. This is oddly good so far. Keep editing and drop me a line when you are done, so that I may come back and properly comment this. Good luck to you. Keep running on your supply of weird!


    • Black Narcissus gold member
      September 25
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      For what it's worth it's finished. Please don't ask me to explain it, I'm really not sure where it came from myself


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 25
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    Edit and nudge me when its done.

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