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Just Another Shard of Glass

A million little pieces
I am broken
Stepping over the shards of glass my broken life

You broke another piece
and threw it away
as though it was trash

Shattered from the start
You couldn't resist
splintering another piece

I catch a glimpse in the fractured glass
an image of a girl
so dark and hurt

She was broken from the start
You just couldn't help
but shatter her a little more

Author notes

This poem was written right after I experienced a painful situation. This is my reaction. It's a little rough but essentially it is raw emotion so I feel it conveys a strong message.

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 25

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    This does convey a strong message. I think you've put your hurt into words, here. Hopefully, writing this helped you.

    A very human and real poem.


  • saltine796
    September 25
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    The imagery was good here. Don't forget that I'm here for you whenever you need to talk or anything. You know you have my number!