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I Am Already Dead

I thank you, for being the person you are, for being my girl, my everything.
But please accept that I cannot go one more day without having held you.
What kind of fucking planet is this, hell on earth or am I missing something?
I am that bad of a person that I don't deserve you in my arms? obviously.
There will never be another who loved you as much as I did,
there wil never be another who needed you as much as I did.
For as long as this life continues to screw up, I will have always needed you more.
But no amount of love will change the way things are,
doesn't matter what we all wish for, in truth it's all gone.
We can not turn back nor erase the mistakes our ancestors made,
we cannot uncover the already hidden graves of who we could have been.
If the shadows are who I am, then so be it, God knows I am used to it.
I will never hold the girl who kept my heart beating, I am already dead.

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    October 13

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    This is such an amazing write. It was so heartfelt and I can relate to this so much. Thank you so much for sharing this personal piece of writing, well done, its brilliant.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 10

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    Oh you will baby, nothing could ever prevent that. You are my everything. We are each others shadow and within them we are together. I love you baby.


    You adoring wife forever


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 2

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    Wow, this is a deep, powerful piece. Rich in emotions. Life is full of errors and mistakes, we stumble about blindly sometimes, unable to undo that which is done, yet we keep going. This could be interpreted several ways, neatly penned


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 25

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    Aww James, a million hugs to you, our world is fucked up and I know how it feels, but it really isn't us or anything we've done it is just a society that prefers to hurt people rather than help them