Oh dear wound where do i start from
my sorrows force you to come
i bleed and time doesnt heal
im just wondering when will he feel
Dear wound, where did i get you from?
simply, my heart fell in love with a dumb
a psycho that tortured my heart
oh wound, where do i start
how many colors of life are there
very tough that no one could bare
so he just chose to stare
oh wound please tell me you care
i had enough of love
it causes you from deep to above
i dont wanna have a heart
oh wound, where do i start
24-9-2009
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i got the inspirations from a song
please tell me what you think
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Thanks alot Eccentrikchild <3
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Lovely
I love this poem. It's very deep and honest. My favourite line is when it says, "how many colors of life are there..." I also love the rhymes;I can never manage to do that. [: -
Thanks alot ceilidha and penman
that really means alot to me
(L)
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Excellent.
What a great write. And so very well expressed. Thank you for sharing
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wow , love this!
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Thanks patty thanks alot
ur commenst really mean to me
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Oh D I really like the rythmn and flow of this one. It rhymes well and shows a lot of emotion. I understand what you write about. I read a poem this morning and I will get the link to it so you can read it. I think you will enjoy the message. Nice to see you are writing again. Welcome back my dear friend.
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