The Pineapple Pit Stop - Chapter One
Her kisses were barbed wire ---
No, scratch that.....her kisses were RUSTY
barbed wire, dipped in honey hatch chili sauce.
Her breath...eloquent;
At times
not kindly so.
But her taste......ahhhhhh....
Her taste
More often than not there was
Pineapple. I'm not sure why.
I never saw her touch it.
But, if I licked her shoulder
Nibbled my way down her ribs
Kissed my way across the small of her back
There it was.....Pineapple.
Fine.
A sweet cream and cinnamon spot
nestled snuggly beneath each earlobe
offered dessert on more than one occasion.
The pina colada mint trail
amongst the small hairs
across the back of her neck
a sublime riposte to the
urgency with which she
clutched my ass.
She was not a patient one....
No
Have you ever been driving your car
fast as hell
through the mountains
JUST to discover you had no brakes?
Pissing your pants...
Praying GOD will let you live
Driving like you've
NEVER DRIVEN BEFORE
You reach the bottom alive....
(Holy Crap!)
And you stare at the car.
You stare at the mountain.
You stare at the dark stain
running down your pant leg.
You search the clouds in wonder.....
And turn around and do it again.
Making love to her was JUST like that.
What did you think
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I have to admit to chuckling at this one. I love the style, it's a sensual race into a reality of an ending I know very well (at least in my youth). I never could keep my foot off the gas or my tongue off the gear shift 
Your piece weas brilliantly done indeed. Long time since I've seen you 'round here mister 
Welcome back.
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This was a classic example of poetic film noir. I could hear you narrating this and I could see the duskiness of a classic black and white film just waiting for Bogart to slip from the shadows. Such wonderful fun and sexiness to this piece!
You know you never were really invisible...but your absence was greatly felt here. So nice to read you again.
Its been a long time since I remembered why I used to like to write... You definitely reminded me why writing can be fun and satisfying.
Mary Ann
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Ahhh shucks Miss Mary Ann, I missed you too. ;-) Hey...I need your number so we can go see a movie! Of course, I usually go with about 3 seconds notice.....huh... a lot like my sex life. Any way......slumberland calls.....(but it's collect and I don't have any quarters....life's a bitch).
hugs! InvisibleMan
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HAHAHA, I love it! it made me smile and giggle.
I love your unique sense of humor.
ACES!
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Thanks, WOL. A shaky, yet successful re-launching. I still got it! ;-)
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Why thank you, WOL. We aim to please (hopefully better than when I'm standing in front of the john). :-)
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OMG~~~~
You know Your Humor is so Unique...I almost lost my breakfast from the second line on down~ You need to have a disclaimer~
I don't mean Diss----> Claim Her
This is Rich with Imagery to the point I felt the wind through my hair
while reading in my swivel chair...without brakes
Brilliant~ Woot! You haven't lost that touch my Friend~~~~~
now about those brakes
You know it brought back a memory of how I imagined
someone say Dick Cheney jumping out of an airplane
for kicks and then realizing he had a parachute malfunction...
Boy would that suck dirt
Hmmmmmmmmm~ I imagine that *feeling* would
produce the elegant stain You speak of
Love this!!
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Humor
Best wishes in all You do my Friend
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Yeah...it was kind of weird...I THOUGHT it was going to be a seriously sensual piece....a bit rough perhaps, but serious. But, for some reason, that pineapple just sort of appeared and everything kinda slid sideways after that. Kinda' like my ass before the repair job. ;-)
Thanks for the comment, Dez. You're just so sweet & spicy I'll bet you were a teriyaki chicken wing in a past life! ;-p -
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Oooooooooooh Realllllyyyyyyyy
I was getting that sorta sensual vibe too-
until the brakes went out
Hey and how You know I was a teriyaki chicken
...looks at past life notes...
How You know
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A gentleman would NEVER be so indiscrete as to divulge privileged information. Are you DENYING that you taste like teriyaki chicken? Come to think of it, teriyaki and pineapple go pretty good together. Maybe YOU should star in a chapter of Pineapple Pit Stop.
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Now I am pleading the fifth because my lawyer said so-
Ahem...
(learned from Law & Order)
and since You mentioned it~ usually teriyaki chicken has
pineapple ...Hmmmm~ Hawaiian BBQ does at least
At least I was not a spit roasted
...Whew~
or some mad
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-and why did I smile just then- 
You have much to follow up on in Your Pineapple Pit Stop
I have to conga out of here for a bit but You bring much
to the table here~ sooooooooooooooooo
the next installment won't have skid marks in it right
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pleading the fifth
When I was with my wife, pleading AND a fith worked sometimes.
Terriyaki chicken and pineapple (insert raised eyebrow here)....a coincidence....or destiny? I've got it.....you did Colonel Fulldork in the library with a candelabra.....and he loved it! oops...sorry....a bad Clue flashback. Where were we?
Sorry...I've been busy moving the last couple of weeks. And.....as of 4:30 this afternoon....(drum roll please) I have furniture! Although I think I'll miss the early Shamrock milk crate entertainment center. At least wirh me having a bed now, the trampoline is back in the family room with the Wesson oil , the vacuum bag sealer and the rest of my sex toys. Of course the goat is getting nervous again but you can't have everything.
Well....it's time for my sponge bath....oh, nurse!
InvisibleMan ;-)
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Way to wake up this morning brother, geeze, you just made having no breaks sound like a good thing.. and I enjoyed the descriptive weaving you do so well. Nice to see your pen back at work, you were missed.
Peace, brother Timothy
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Glad you enjoyed it, Timothy. Not my usual stuff but, I'm a bit rusty.....and it was fun! Take care, bro! :-)
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Wowzer!!! So, so much here... A story... Strong Emotion... The hint of the unknown... I leave this sublime poem, wanting hot sensual sex, fast cars, and the hint of pineapple across my soul and senses... Thanks for sharing!!! Extrememly well done, in my humble opinion!!! She sounds worth more than one pissing of the pants, lol......
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Thanks, Roland. It's been a while since I've written anything and when that started coming out of the pen, I just sort of watched in fascination. What was my pen thinking????? :-)
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