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broken wings

she gets out of a hospital bed
the nurses disregard what she's said
they stitched up her wrists, when she learns to fall
they've gotten used to ignoring it all

she walks out of the empty room
acting like a flower that will never bloom
stuck inside on a beautiful day
the curtains help darkness stalk it's prey

she feels alone, like a part of her died
and they won't help her look inside
they just tower above like a dark cabaret
and try as she might, she can't fly away.

Author notes

i've completely lost myself and i don't mind.
inspired by sweet sacrifice-evanescence. it doesn't really have anything to do with the lyrics, but instead, the tune.

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  • incomplete sanity
    September 25
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    I like the way it flows all together...its a great poem nice write