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In between dances

Alone in fetid darkness

tracing the patterns of bruised flesh

he called this his lovemark.

 

I know I'm stupid

for buying and believing

that same ole song and dance.

 

I am slightly neurotic.

 Every woman wrapped
in a single, space of skin.
Your go-to girl
reaching new heights every time you snap
them fucking calloused fingers.


And when you wrap them around my neck

tighten the noose, of my life

cause I'm a hazard.

 

So are you.

 

 

This dance is coming to an end

my feet are weary,

this flesh is torn

and you're just a nightmare I can't wake up from. 



 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    September 29

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    Ahhh, what a poem you penned...and just in time for my birthday, too. Sheesh, Woman. Your writing is as solid and as intense as ever.



  • Slyder
    September 25

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    Brings to mind

    one of my favorite stanards-
    ~quoth the Raven, "Nevermore!~

    I like the stark reality of this and the startling insight it suggests. A dark and biting study of midlife that belies your years...
    I just hope you're not truly this cynical yet, just glimpsing at some inner mirror with a darkened room behind you- that when you turn around that black-cloaked specter isn't really there.