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Firsts

It's your very first day
You seem so lost, astray
You don't want to ask
Don't be late for class!

You run down the hall
Right past Mr. Montall
He's angry and yells
Oops that's the bell!

You walk in ashamed
Say your mother was to blame
Sit in your seat
Now you're in for a treat

So much to do
This is all just so new
Where your homework did lay
All was due the next day

Now gather up your things
As you hear the bell ring
You're off to the bus
Until tomorrow's big fuss

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