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A Short Auto-Biography

I born was into a very Irish Catholic family
lots of priests and nuns.
To this day I hold the teachings and the parables
of my childhood catacism
the north star of my life.

But Jesus the man, yes or no
the 'Son of God' ...
as I have gotten older it no longer really matters.

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 2

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    short and to the point
    words of life summed up in a few short lines
    time well tell dear soul
    Hugs and love the message Hugs Angel♥


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    October 1

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    Sounds familiar.

    A very open, honest piece of writing. Of course you already know I find the ending illogical... but you're Santa, and that's allowed.

    Nice to visit your page again.


    • bobanonymous gold member
      October 3
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      I had to repeat it... I was honest as i could be about a very deeply seated belief...It was accidental...


  • neurosine gold member
    September 27

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    I've discovered that I am San Churro, the Chocolate Jesus of Mexico. I'll get a picture if possible so you know I'm only slightly insane. I actually have no idea of his legacy...but I like to call myself the Spanish Chocolate Jesus. Do you have an email address I could send the pic to?

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