I glimpsed pass the immediate hill herds
‘Midst the mingled brush, burst birds
Not of prey—
Of song and play…
I spied varied tree bathed in fog
Brisk went my eye’s cog
Briskly—some breeze passed in band
Sunlight bathed the land
Dazzled by the view in hand
I gulped in mid-thought
Enraptured at what my Lord has wrought
It was the depression in the ground
London’s look-a-like was all around
The sparrows played ‘hide-and-seek’
From my deck, I dared to peek
Then—my shallow arrogance turned meek…
Author notes
This is a response from my love of nature. I felt the inclination and went with it. Thank you for the visit and reading.
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Amazing this was more beautiful more picteresque than any words can ever express,the last line is the most beautiful and the soul of your verse.God bless and please keep sharing...
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My gracious, this is without doubt, very high complementing here. Thank you so much for it. I don't think I can show enough gratitude to you for the way you've been this generous in commenting. I'm happy with the way you feel about this poem. I didn't even know my verse had soul (smiling). I'll be glad to share knowing there are people like you how don't mind reading from me.
AsIThink...
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What an amazing trip thru nature! it certainly felt real, viceral..ans serene.. excellent imagery kid..
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Dude, you're a mess. BUT, thanks for the compliments just the same (lol...j.k.) -
- Glad to know that you liked this one too.
AsIThink...
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Wow~
Now this is one Unique Creation You have penned
Adore the external rhyme also alliteration~
My tongue~~ was twisting and turning but in a good
way for I Love this Musing~ took me there~
Bravo!!
Yay!
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Dee, you're a writer's gift. Always filled up with kindness and overflowing in generosity that you obviously find very easy (and rewarding too I think) share. Thank you for your kind thoughts here. I'm really happy about what you had to say about this poem.
AsIThink...
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Thank you for sharing
such an eye you have
such beauty that surrounds us and goes unnoticed
but not you
you take what God has given us
and see it as it meant to be seen,
every detail is full of awareness
a wonderful pleasure to see from your view
God bless you my friend...
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Hello again PR. It's good to see you in this neck of the woods lol. Thanks for compliments and for always seeing so much in what I write about. And thank you for your inspiring opinion of me. Always great to get a read from you.
AsIThink...
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