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The Park

I wish you would
Meet
Me here in this
Orange
Hazy wasteland
Where
We shared
Chinese
Under luminescent
Stars.
If only you
Knew
What this metal
Woven
Sandbox means to
me.

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    November 17

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    Beautiful write about feeling nostolgic and missing your love. Fantastic imagery as well. Thanks for sharing hun.


  • peridotPixi
    September 25

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    This is a beautiful poem- i was exspecting a photo prompt contest after i read it, and i dont even see a picture that has insipred this write-well i do see a beautiful picture this poem has painted in my mind great job with the imgainary and descriptive words you have used, as always keep up the writing, ~Amy