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a small crime


as if i have been asleep my whole life.

as if waking had a colour, the
blue, the red,

the colour of eyelids

as if all i have ever known is the
early morning blankets,

the slow breathing,
the sweat, the still-
life

a human being cannot live like this

you are on fire,
you are burning,

i cannot help
but watch

you, like the fresh
cut ends of hair,

grass blades newly sharpened,
the ring of tiny bells

the capacity to love,

i want to dig it out of your
breathing
body


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  • heaven all alone
    October 22
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    i love this...


  • Jettison
    October 1

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    will you write more poems about my life, please? so far, so good.

    you are on fire, you are burning, i cannot help but watch? genius.


  • aeolia
    October 1

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    i haven't read your writing before and i am so glad that i have found it. it's like something i can devour sans remorse, and better than a tub of ben and jerry's. brava.

    do think you could probably hyphenate "grass blades," though.

    -endymion


    • philosphyofkate
      October 1
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      i think it should be hyphenated... but it read all funny, so i didn't. maybe i'll do it anyway.

  • tara wilson gold member
    September 25

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    when you post, it is always, always something exceptional. thank you.

  • Rowan gold member
    September 25

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    Wow. I wished you'd write more often kate, this is why. sighs.


  • nolazydaizy
    September 25

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    i love your words. i've missed them. life is full of small crimes.

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