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Moon

Soft shining shadows
In the air a silver glow-

Smile of the moon

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  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    October 12

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    A crescent moon comes to mind after reading this poem. Nicely done.


  • myrataal silver member
    September 25

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    Ah.

    I can see the half moon with its silvery smile! Well done.
    Love
    Myra


    • SilverQ
      September 25

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      As usual, your comments add another perspective into my poem! I didn't even think about how the cresent moon looks like a smile =)


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 24

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    I like this. Good luck in the contest

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