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Self-Destructing Stars

Tap, tap, tap....

Tired eyes stare right -through-
The bleak windows

{{bloodshot}}

Bitten fingernails ~trace~
Across the r/e/f/l/e/c/t/i/v/e glass
(displaying a type of gracefulness?)

I wish.

The only thing that keeps me s.a.n.e.
are the ticking of the second hand
Hung high  ^up^  there with all the


d.    eath

  y.      earns to

      i.        magine

        n.        ight's

            g.        littering

               

stars... 





((Losingtime&fightinggravity))



Author notes

this is my style of dp...

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  • fairy princess k
    September 25
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    Hey

    Kool poem =), you have a unique style of writing, very clever,brilliant and wonderful k.
    thanks for your enrtie .
    byyyyyyyyyye k