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America the Beautiful

Glory, Honor, Allegance, Courage, Loyalty, Justice, Integrity, Respect, Dedication, Faith, and Strength.

Stanad tall, with your fingers to your brow and your hand over your heart.
The thirteen stripes, and fifty stars, and years of strength and wisdom wave in the shimmering breeze.
Glowing in the light of the dawn, she flows- like waves on the mighty ocean blue.
Pride; she streams through the air, chin high, shoulders back worthy of salute.
She was built on the mighty priniciples : equality, justice, and freedom.
Like no other she shines through all demise.
A true symbol of hope;she sways through the dark of night. bringing a burning light of victory to all.
We stand in awe of the magnificent majesty.
She si grounded, secure, and strong.
An example to all becoming a fighting soldier, and rememberance to those who have come before us.
Your strength is beyond compare and remains throughout the years.
And so,k we salute you America....the Beautiful.

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  • stringtobrane
    September 26

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    excellent

    Glad to see Americanism is still alive. Your writing is heartfelt and well done.
    Couple of typo's but that is easily fixed. thanks.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 26
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    Awesome job, Its been a long time since I've read one of these writes! Keep writing!

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