whirling, swirling
into space
further down
thoughts erase
blackness invades,
your soul
incased
thumping, jumping
deaths embrace
A contest entry
- Prompt: ... a dream on our way to death by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended September 26, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice rhyming


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love this poem short but much impact!!

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Thank You for Your Entry ~
the dark green font makes this a little difficult to read against the black
I love how much impact this holds in it's few lines and words; it read to me like someone was gasping the words out in frustration - excellent
best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda




