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clenched teeth

seeing boys
I've secretly burned for
in pictures




with attractive
blonde girls




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I'd meant for this to start a poem, but I think it says all it needs to.

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  • deibler
    September 24
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    ...Oh, and don't worry about the blonde girls... Redheads are hotter, anyway. >.O

  • deibler
    September 24

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    I don't exactly think I get the full message from this, but I think I understand everything the poem intends for me to understand, and that's what it's about.


  • Heavenlyfate
    September 24
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    Haha to be honest i dont understand it but then again im kinda slow.... lol