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a girl

 I want a girl that wears sunscreen

and pants tight in the hips but loose

in the knees;

and sings lullabies to passing cars

out of pitch but in rhythm.

 

I want a girl that comes from the

east and has a cognition fetish

and a preference for complexity. 

 

She needs pale skin and the

darkest hair that creates shadows

on her face and darkens her stare.

 

Defining the difference between

poor and bad and well and good

would make her even better.

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  • the-hurricane-girl
    November 19
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    <3

    Adorable.. like the way you've captured how the simple things can be so amazing =)


  • Megalodon
    October 12

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    "She needs pale skin and the
    darkest hair that creates shadows
    on her face and darkens her stare."

    This is what all men should dream about. I think you're great for not following the medias idea of what an attractive girl should look like.


  • Tzipora
    October 3

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    I want a girl that wears sunscreen

    and pants tight in the hips but loose

    in the knees;

    and sings lullabies to passing cars

    out of pitch but in rhythm.

    lovee thatt.

    jeans likee that are hard to findd

    beatiful write



  • bluebird.
    September 25

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    Imagining this is on your page doesn't really work, since I can leave clappy men here but not there.


  • o0-Wall-Flower-0o
    September 25
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    that was really good =]


  • insidemjsnotebook
    September 24
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    That'd be me.


    Haha jk. This was cute.

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