Oh God!..
I find the curiousity in silence
of how your ways would work
had they been true
the ease with which you'd
turn the time around
intentions I would have to hide from you
no deity shall answer prayers
not in earnest
those whispered with an air
of giving up
instead keep looking
for the wheel of fortune to forgive you
attribute everything forthwith to gentle Gods
A contest entry
- the most curious help ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended September 25, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Solid...
Good thoughts here poet, and you have done well with your presentation and wording. Congradulations on the Bronze Trophy as well.
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this is a winner in more sense that one. it has the power tio make you go deep within your spiritual self and lets you be free to be curious. the tone is introspective, the cadence is steady and the flow is gentle.
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Ah..the lines are printed in the pages of the soul, it looks..and brings the mystic interpretaion of the CURIOUS God...this is beautiful poetry my friend..
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