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Release, Catch, Sing

Release it
and as it falls away
catch it up one more time
let it go to sing and play,
and together you can laugh the day away

and in our song
every harmony and cross
an echo eerie or stifling
or a rapture of joy and glee
like heavens we soar and fly all ways
and in our intermingling
our dance ignites the globe

so let it go
and as it falls away
catch the glimpse of something new
something exciting, like an horizon waiting
something beautiful like a morning in a lovers arms
and catch the feelings
resolve the picture to make it clear
and sing every ounce into the sky

and when you hear that song
release it, feel it
and catch another beat
pick up on the next harmony
and feel the song swell, and emotion explode
and like the sunrise or sunset
when our song stops, we will sing again
though different tunes, and different beats
and in different times and different breaths
the ensemble may change as well

and through it all just release and flow
catch and let go
sing it away, and sing it closer
always dancing, playing, laughing
we unite in song, and through it we live.

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  • FlipperSwitch
    September 26
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    I can tell you had a lot of thoughts for this poem, but it came together nicely. Good to see you still visit