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Asunder (song)

I took a walk only to remember,
with time abruptly running out;
I think t'would be perfect to
take this opportunity to talk about...
A story of thunder
The sky produced lightning
that tore asunder
Guilty; I wonder...
Now is not the time for shame
In the end you only have yourself to blame
Sending messages via bottles and carrier pidgeon
Instead of sending them through the television

I can't fake enough to make you real
I can't feel what is so surreal!
I cant fake enough I cant fake enough
I CANT FEEL WHAT IS SO SURREAL!!

The only existing juxtapositions
Are merely limited editions

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  • Fireprincess624
    October 8
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    I really do like it. ^_^

  • Nie
    October 1

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    It is short but I can imagine it repeating at various spots. I liked it right away. This has great potential as a lyrics! Well done


  • Gay-Militant
    September 24
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    its a very short song. but an enjoyable one all the same.

  • TrulyLoothy
    September 24
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    plz comment

    plz

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