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The Name

For a single word of hope, The world shall fade
And none again should speak the name
Whispers ceased, Falling like snow against cold brick walls.
Never will they enter broken dwelling places locked in
Eternal darkness.
Forever solitary, longing to taste the letters lingering on
Young tongues, innocent of blood, so cursed as this.
Not one does dare to challenge fate when closed are
Gaps within time and sand.
No sun to sparkle off perfect prisms in a window pane.
For the word of hope, Let the world fade....
Not spoken, but seen is he The Name!

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Trust in God.. he is the unseen, that can fill any darkened corner with light.

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  • xxxKiyoixxx
    September 24

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    Excellent Job. God is the only one who can save us from the darkness. You can't see him but he is there. Excellent. Excellent. I really love this! Beautiful Job!