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at least once a week

again another bad night
the sheets feel heavy
dark room
counting the clock tics
waiting
wondering
when
will
the other
shoe
fall

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  • Suffer-in-silence
    October 5
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    i like it,
    its very good.
    i love the imagery

    -Rosie


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 24

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    The emotion and imagery in this coupled with the brevity was incredibly powerful and it felt deeply sorrowful. You did a fantastic job.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~