Food is fear
Pain is good
Life is death
And death is near
Let me go
Let me cry
You don’t care
Let me die
A contest entry
- Short and sweet by Tuesdays-child.
900 points, ended October 6, 2009, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Here.We.GO. by RainbowXButterflies.
550 points, ended October 3, 2009, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ideas for improvement?
Comments
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Wow..it was like I requested..short! It 'twas pretty punchy too. A little depressing, though.
Great job - I enjoyed it!
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Oops, sorry about the depressing bit
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kinda creepy... but flows very nicely.
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Aww, I'm sorry
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nah it ok. after reading a poem about growing boogers and dragons named custard this one just threw me off for a sec. good luck in the contest!
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Ok, I am now going to go and find that, I want a giggle =D
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